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words tossed gently
on a spinning river top
sink as stones to rise again
and kiss the break of day.

resurface, ripple, and repeat.
not you again.
next poem I upload will by fixed forms. promise. ^^;






Other poetry by me you may enjoy:
Pianist: [link]
In The Garden: [link]
Yellow Spring: [link]
Beneath The Black Willows: [link]
We Dreamed Of Silver Sails: [link]


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Adagiobunny Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Student Writer
so many circles & cycles - pebbles in clear pools, thoughts rippling outward...
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:heart:
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coveredwithgrass Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
a really beautiful piece.
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you <3
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coveredwithgrass Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
not at all. 'tis my pleasure.
also i have added you to my watch. i really like your work :)
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you very much!! :squee:
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coveredwithgrass Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
you're very welcome! :)
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KJ-Illustration Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Your wonderful work has been featured here: [link] :heart:
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, thank you so much~!! It's an honor and I highly appreciate it~! :happybounce:
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CyborgDeamonEaterG Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012  Student General Artist
pretty, its feels like it has a secret meaning well more than one that is

I must read deeper into this mystery

its very pretty though, even though it dosnt all rhyme it dose sound smooth, lovely
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