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There was something of the night, she would say, which had always frightened her.
It wasn't the moonless shadows or the strange prolixity of sounds, but the way the skyline would shatter just beyond the city's crest, as if proving to her childish mind that nothing is truly limitless. Not even the sky.

Just a bit of the book I may start writing...
I've never written anything of this kind of length or depth before, so I'm a bit hesitant to start but I figured hey, even if I completely loose all motivation or it ends up being a flop, at least I tried :lol:
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Ricardo-Orozco Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have always wanted to write a novel !!! I am definitely going to try now ! oh btw! Your words are marvelous... I had to search what prolixity meant but other then that I think I can be at your level ;) !!
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! I actually wrote this the same day I found out what it meant x) I just loved the sound of it so I had to put it to some sort of use :D
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow... this is some start! I loved it! I don't know why you have named it untitled but the way the little mind couldn't comprehend that idea (I am assuming it is a young girl) and it was not the terrors that terrorize typical minds but more than that. Quite wonderful... short and has quite the impact!
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed it ^^
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NotenSMSK Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome :)
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UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012   Writer
i think you should definitely go for it.
you show remarkable potential for someone as young as you are, and your writing is immortal
i hope you realize, someday your words will change the world. it has already started to.

thank you, for sharing your beautiful art
it's quite humbling. :heart:
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my goodness, this comment means so so much to me, thank you. I will certainly try not to disappoint! :thanks:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Student Writer
This is REALLY beautiful. I love these sort of self-contained flash fictions. Except that in the context of a longer work, that may be a problem - this does feel self-contained. Although maybe in the context of a larger piece that would be less striking.
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh, very true. Although I have read a few novels that still seemed to uphold those certain paragraphs/quotes of self-containment. They stand out among the rest, but still seem to carry the book's overall theme. Of course doing that myself and reading how another person has done it are veeerry different things x) So thank you!! I'll be sure to keep your comment in mind!! :nod:
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winterkate Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Student Writer
Hey, you're really welcome! The transfer from any genre to another can be really difficult - you seem to be handling it very well :)
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