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a rainbow
spectrum of
soft bruises
nestles in
the space
between her
fingertips
and heartbeat.
a silent reminder of
all the nights
she spent in
the solitude
of your
company.

:iconholdthenoise:
Been doing a lot of free verse lately....
I promise I'll get back to rhyming soon!! :crying:

Just.....just let me savor this a little while longer Cx







Poem © Sadee Esquivel
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*DireWolfwere Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh I love free verse, this one is beautiful <3 I'm probably interpreting this totally wrong like I usually do buuuuuut it makes me think of a person who is abused and so the abuser's company really isn't company at all x:
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Mood: Love ~samoholic Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
OMG, I was listing to Rihanna & Eminem I Love the way You Lie and well, I know how to not let the things I'm listening to not affect what I'm reading. But I totally picked up the abuse in this poem.

OMG, and I was being to think I couldn't understand some really adult/mature quality Poetry.
:iconcry-plz: I should read up on it though, because I would really like to enjoy Poetry more.

I love this, great job!
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*DireWolfwere Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hahaha I think you replied to the wrong person^^
I love this poem too^^
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~samoholic Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, yeah, but I really did and did not. Does that make sense? I was replying to yours because I had a similar thought about it. I hope the author still gets notice.
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*DireWolfwere Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ohhh yeah I understand^^
I'm pretty sure the artist only gets the message if you reply or comment on her own posts though :/
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~samoholic Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
aww crap. lol
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Mood: Love ~HoldTheNoise Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Dude!! Yes!! You totally got it :iconrlytearplz: I think you may be the first x)
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*DireWolfwere Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg yay:D this is a first for me:dummy:
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~HoldTheNoise Aug 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icongreatjobplz:
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~kaIoth Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I rather enjoy the picture it pains in your mind.
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