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Such gentle colors drip across your freckled shoulder blades.
A quilt of puddled watercolors soaked in auburn shades.

Spun of golden rivulets and rinsed in autumn skies,
So many endless currents swimming through your lonesome eyes.

Brushing under fingertips and over shattered songs,
Unraveling like morning glaze against my paling palms.

With beauty like October hills and hollow as the skies,
The water drops against the earth will be our lullaby.
Something I just recently dug up from my trip to the Tennessee Mountains not too long ago. I completely forgot this poem existed actually (x

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Oh my goodness, thank you all so much for my very first DD!! I'm so honored I don't even know what to do. Thank you to all the people who have taken the time to read it and to all the lovely comments! It is all greatly appreciate~! :blowkiss:
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Given 2012-11-13
October Eyes has enchanting rhyme and a lilting rhythm. Have some words, courtesy of ~HoldTheNoise ( Suggested by Nyatto and Featured by Nichrysalis )
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Wow. Talk about less is more. :)
Short and Simple. Very beautiful and inspiring.
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HoldTheNoise Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! (:
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Coliri May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Tan simple y tan hermoso <3
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HoldTheNoise May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
aw, muchas gracias!
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:iconraynechordalyne:
I really like this... I can see it becoming a song, all too easily.
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HoldTheNoise Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, if only I could write music!! ^^;
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imaginative-lioness Feb 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have featured this piece in my journal: [link]
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HoldTheNoise Feb 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! (:
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NotenSMSK Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hello there :) first, congrats on the DD! This work surely deserved it :) Now lets see... well there is little critical to say. I love the rhyme and rhythm and the soft expressions with wonderful meter just make one read it again and again. Wonderful imagery! I would say that the beauty of the work is in the flow of it. Anyways, good job and keep writing!
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HoldTheNoise Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. I really appreciate the kind words! :hug:
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