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A miniature moon floats sleepily
atop my open window;
a drifting continent sifting
over shivering tree tops.
Watery clouds explore along the
broken crest of atoms,
fingers rolling in the shadows
of its dimensions.
My skewed sight steadily begins to
repaint the scattered stars and
one by one like raindrops,
they burst across the sky
Breathing down in thoughtful shafts
upon the inside of my eyelids.
I'm thankful to be an insomniac.
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H-HELLO AGAIN :iconpapmingplz:

Last post for a little while. School's about to start back and I already have tons of homework to do :crying:
Don't my teachers know I have poetry needing posting?!




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Vivid. Just so beautifully writting. BIG FAN.
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Mood: Love ~HoldTheNoise Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gaahhh, THANK YOU!! :iconlalalaplz:
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I like it, and I thought that it was funny that I was reading this at almost 4:00 at night.
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~HoldTheNoise Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, oooh Irony, you never cease to amuse me x) :iconmingplz:
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~GlitteringCloud Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful, really awesome!
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~HoldTheNoise Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! :D
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~PearlsCat Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really great! Awesome imagery. I liked the line "fingers rolling over the shadows of its dimensions." Reminds me of car headlights passing by and leaving light beams across the wall.
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Mood: Joy ~HoldTheNoise Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! You always leave the nicest comments <3 :iconohstopityouplz:
I love reading your observations <33
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~PearlsCat Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your writing is awesome. I can't really write poetry, so I admire people who can.
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~HoldTheNoise Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahhh, well thank you again!! :iconwoohooplz:
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