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If The World is a Book, I Want to Read Every Page.


Let me memorize each dotted "i"
of moonlights freckled face
Trace the silver ripples
of a seashores wrinkled page

Count the auburn stanzas 'tween
the depths of trembling trees
Ride upon the vessel
of a sun-kissed simile.

Open sky-stripped windows
to the sigh of cursive clouds
Shuffle through the metaphors
Awaking through the ground

Slant the sails of poetry
toward continents of sea
Deep into the jungles where
the verses lace the trees.

Catch the winds of free verse
Or the open waves of rhyme
Sift through ocean ballads
where the sunset greets the tide.

Study drops of scripture
as it clicks against the street
Sleep between the pages
of departed poetry.
Someone should've told me I'd be needing my snorkel
cause I am DROWNING IN HOMEWORK HERE.
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Anyways, haven't really gotten the chance to write for the past few days, so sorry for the sloppish-ness XD

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I absolutely adore what you've done here. The continuous between the world and a book is wonderful. You've taken a concept of ordinary means and taken it to extraordinary levels. I honestly don't have anything negative to comment on. The stanzas easily flow into each other. It feels like you planned this from the very beginning, since the first line of the poem. This is truly inspirational. I think many poets would agree with me. After this, I think I'll take a peek at the rest of your work. If this poem is anything to go off of, I'm sure I won't be disappointed. :)
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forestmeetwildfire Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your fantastic work has been featured here!
I'd really appreciate it if you could give some love to the other features and :+fav: the journal :heart:
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HoldTheNoise Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh thank you! I'm honored, and of course I will (:
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forestmeetwildfire Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :)
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:iconpanickypinky:
You have a beautiful way with words and metaphors. Such a great rhythm too (:
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HoldTheNoise Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, Thank you so much~!
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DragonRider1113 Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing. It gave me chills when I read it. Fantastic :)
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HoldTheNoise Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so much for reading~!! I'm happy to hear you liked it~~ :squee:
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NoneofThatNow Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Incredible.
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HoldTheNoise Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you thank you~!! :hug:
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