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Beneath the black willows
the moonlight deploys
unnoticed through soft braided reeds.
Though fingers were broken
the moonbeams disperse
like organ pipes sifting the breeze.

Beneath the black willows
a violet crow falls
to perch upon empty a chest.
A hollowed form spun
through the breath of the wind
His toes brushed the finger tipped crest.

Beneath the black willows
there swings a white noose
and from it there swings a man high.
He dances each morning
He dances each night
I imagine he's thankful to fly.
Another poem about death...yeah...


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nickie101 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You're very talented!
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!
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Hardly-Crazy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012
All I can say is wow.
This is too good for words :)
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Aww, thank you so so much!! Your support is far enough <33:glomp:
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Hardly-Crazy Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
No problem ^^
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dgREYmOUSER Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
.. particularly enjoyed the last stanza. :)
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Agh, thanks~!! The last stanza's my favorite too!! :iconcblushplz:
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Golden-Leaves Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You have such a gift. Do not waste it.
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HoldTheNoise Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~!! I'm trying my best not to~ :thanks:
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LookingGlassInk Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2012
Marvelous writing. You have a way of creating vivid images that many writers lack. You've done an excellent job with this poem and I especially love the darkly glib note that you end on with "I imagine he's thankful to fly." Great work. Thanks for sharing. :)
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