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Flitting heartbeat, sparrow high,
twisting round the mountain's eye,
tracing breath of shattered skies
and filling velvet palms.

Falling sparrow, cry of stone,
wings of mist and powder bone
sipping, slipping from thy throne
within their crimson throng.

Treading now, beneath the clouds
As what was once so heaven bound
now falling, falling, to the ground
And singing silent songs.

Fly no more, above the arcs
singing side thy fellow Larks
curl beneath their shadows dark
and sing your silent songs.

Your flitting heartbeat, Sparrow high,
now sings of silent songs.
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This poem is a little bit more of a personal bit, so I don't expect you all to interpret every bit as I do. Also had some fun with a little Queen's English flare (or whatever the technical name is) XD

Inspired by a lovely painting by =PEHDTSCKJMBA found here [link]


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Mood: Love *Cygam-7 Feb 28, 2013   General Artist
one word. EPIC :wow:
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~HoldTheNoise Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much dear!! :love:
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~tommyboywood Dec 22, 2012  Professional Writer
nice imagery
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Mood: Love ~HoldTheNoise Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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Mood: Wow! ~Mierren Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
wow. this is absolutely impressive! you really have outdone yourself this time!
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Mood: Love ~HoldTheNoise Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!! your comments always make my day! :blowkiss:
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~Shamoneness Oct 25, 2012  Student Photographer
This is so amazing! I absolutely love your way of writing c: It seems so effortless
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Mood: Joy ~HoldTheNoise Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!! I'm glad you took the time to read it OvO
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This reminds me of the story of the guy who only had one wing, so someone made him another out of wax. Then the guy was able to fly, only he got too close to the sun and the wax wing melted. Sorry, I can't think of any names or what the story was called...This was a beautiful poem, I enjoyed it so much ^^
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